Snozzcumbers’ Diary

Today the Snozzcumbers explored sentence stacking to create a shared diary entry. We wrote the diary entry from the viewpoint of the camera. We created sentences together as a team and we would read our work to ensure it made sense, we would then edit our work to improve it to make it more exciting and interesting to the reader.

Tomorrow the Snozzcumbers will be able to use these ideas during their BIG WRITE.

Well done everyone!

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